~ Lie Sly ~ Comments

Happy catharsis hopefully to be reached by everyone :)

I really like the way you present your poems..its unique..its interesting..loved it

Aye, aye. Which was the lie?

cleverly written poem with plenty of oomph. A Good write. Lynn

I could see your personality in the poem. You like people that are confident like you. You speak your mind And you want people to speak their mind.

A lovely-and interesting- poem. I have to tell you that this poem-and others as well-has a freshness of perception that's strikingly pleasing and your economical usage of language can be mind-boggling and eye-catching.Enjoyed the poem a 10+++ Love,

Love To die Else are Lie Sly ////////////////////shama pe mar jaye parwana.. flies die on light still go after it... that is love dear.. keep smiling... i may follow suit....lovely poem.........10 read mine gay menace.....i miss Note: - some of ph sections are no working here including mange comments

Love To die Else are Lie Sly................................it happens when a pen becomes digital hand.Robotically well written poem.

Compact wording but its diction has good impact. Specially liked the ending five lines. Very well crafted.

‘…Hue buy // Posthumously dye // Starry psychic sky. …’ Yes! ! Poets are always Poet…posthumously they’re in, with, within Poem…splendorous imagination…

well, this is well penned poem for real interesting piece luwi

well, this is well penned poem for real interesting piece luwi

wow excellent really great write niv 10

Hue buy Posthumously dye Starry psychic sky. Again why ask: Why? Smilingly say: Bye bye............when it is certain and shot sure to come then why not acccept it smilingly and say bye bye..... lovely composition..how come you could do such beautiful creation.... i loved it and thanks for regards.....10 read mine.. never say die...welcome...visiting hell

Poet has the grit to say bye bye with a broad smile during final exit. Excellent word move like Queen of chase game. [Your poems Checkmate and Checkmate Again lol! ] Ten++ Dr. V

with sweet words played well..................

very nice and unique in its style. you use few words and that makes it more interesting.

nice flow but i didnt really like the message..

playing words wonderfully. shan

playing with words! ! Nice to read, but I expect more from you-serious poetical...Thank you Niv for sharing the poem.