He opens his eyes,
Sleep disturbed,
Her compounding thoughts
Strike a painful chord,
...
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This is the first time to read such a poem written by a woman as generally it is men who fancies such thought.Wonderfully penned.Salute.
libido is should not be a subdued feling between partners nice imagery 10
Expression of the subconscious mind is great Seema! -Raj Nandy
My libido was elevated after reading this beautiful piece.Well done Seema!
Lovely night picture on bed. Indeed, the line 'her anklet chimes' is so nice a symbol of music, of passion, of charming expressions. I like it. I give it 9++, but soon your poems will fetch a full 10. Thanks for sharing. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
Beautiful night piece! Love and libido on bed...the line 'her anklet chimes' speaks about all things before and what could be after...my ten for you, Seema
Modestly handled a sensitive zone thru’ chiseled imagery. ABSTRACT painstaking pondering required. Ten dr. sakti