Saturday, September 27, 2008

# Libido Comments

Rating: 4.9

He opens his eyes,
Sleep disturbed,
Her compounding thoughts
Strike a painful chord,
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Seema Aarella
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Modestly handled a sensitive zone thru’ chiseled imagery. ABSTRACT painstaking pondering required. Ten dr. sakti

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Indira Babbellapati 20 November 2008

many abstractions concealed within!

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Colin Jeffery 15 October 2008

Such a sweet poem. Brilliant

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

great imagery. well written....

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Harish K. Thakur 07 October 2008

Good thoughfulpoem Seema, cary on.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 October 2008

This is the first time to read such a poem written by a woman as generally it is men who fancies such thought.Wonderfully penned.Salute.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

libido is should not be a subdued feling between partners nice imagery 10

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Raj Nandy 27 September 2008

Expression of the subconscious mind is great Seema! -Raj Nandy

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 September 2008

My libido was elevated after reading this beautiful piece.Well done Seema!

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C T Heart 27 September 2008

a clean and expressive fine lines you have...a 10+++.

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Lovely night picture on bed. Indeed, the line 'her anklet chimes' is so nice a symbol of music, of passion, of charming expressions. I like it. I give it 9++, but soon your poems will fetch a full 10. Thanks for sharing. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Joseph Poewhit 27 September 2008

'in responsive abstract' that's farout

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Kesav Easwaran 27 September 2008

Beautiful night piece! Love and libido on bed...the line 'her anklet chimes' speaks about all things before and what could be after...my ten for you, Seema

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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