Saturday, June 24, 2017

Liberty Comments

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I am bound captive.
His eyes glow with dominance, stripping my soul bare and leaving
but the brittle bones of my being.
It seems I revel in the vulnerability, wishing, wanting him to take me.
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Jodie Bawden
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2017

It seems I revel in the vulnerability, wishing, wanting him to take me. To care. He has unlocked the way to my heart........ Entwining my soul with his beautiful expressions of love indeed...... love is a mystery. do not forget it....... it is always a mystery and it should remain a mystery. otherwise love is not love. tony

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Chinedu Dike 25 June 2017

An insightful depiction of love as a voyage of bliss - a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing Jodie.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 June 2017

A tale of love. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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