Sunday, May 23, 2010

Liberty Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was leaning over to you
Looking at your eyes
I saw the dimly lit hope
Carefully asking, 'Back to me? '
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Sayantan Dutta
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All the chains of waiting and apprehension unbuckled finally shining smiling dawn surfaced…into coveted Liberty Nice diction 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ayan Dasgupta 24 May 2010

I see all those lines Put down by a friend And think: I myself Could've penned those instead Words don't come easy You can master the trend But the life asks for life There's a price to be paid.

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