Saturday, April 21, 2007

Liberator Comments

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Like a lover he enters my life,
carrying his dark purpose into the bedroom.
Each thing opens to him like a map.
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Ivan Donn Carswell 21 April 2007

Val, I'm captivated by the ambivalent usage of liberator - the poem is powerful and balances something suggesting external vs internal forces are at work. The final image is cogent and brutal. Freed but a captive... Magnificent. Rgds, Ivan

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Brandi Cuff 21 April 2007

This poem is captivating and deep I will be looking for more of your work!

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Val Morehouse

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