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They left her there, at the junction,
bleeding from torn rags that once
had placed her in the company of
the city's bourgeoisie, as one of them,
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You describe the evil horrors of war and what it does to men and women's lives so devastatingly well Herbert. I hope in liberating them on the page, as she did with her gun, you too will be freed from the memories, which must surely kill day by day. A very courageous write indeed. Perfect in every respect. Tai, trying very hard not to cry, but not succeeding...
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8/30/2025 2:08:15 AM # 1.0.0
vivid and memorable writing, Herbert. a powerful commentary without cliches. good work. a couple of minor things: line 6 should have a comma after 'warning' line 15 should read 'where' instead of 'were' cheers