Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, July 18, 2013

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I was crying foul but proved incorrect
I was told to be patient and advised to act
In line with others and shun the reality
This was almost to be done with sincerity
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Sean Spencer12 minutes ago I had a bit of trouble following it, just because of you're writing style, but unless I completely missed the point then I think you had some good points. it seemed to me you were saying that although we all come to this page to share with each other, we also hvae to be sure we don't baby one another. If a poet is to improve, we have to be shown what we're doing wrong. So if that's what you meant, then I totally agree! Comment +1 Better think twice.

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I was crying foul but proved incorrect I was told to be patient and advised to act

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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