Thursday, April 10, 2014

Liars Curse Comments

Rating: 5.0

A lie is bitter
Stain on the soul
Muddies the waters
To what end or goal
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Danusha Marie
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Anne M 22 June 2019

This poem encouraged me and help me to realize, I was thinking correctly. The liars....yes, this was awesome, -keep up the wonderful writing, you are certainly blessed by the Most High God to write this.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 April 2014

Congratulations! You have chosen a good subject to write on, and it's well written. 'A flaw of character Or lack of couth The ugly act Of hiding the truth' - A good observation and expression. 'Speak with honesty For better or worse Live in dignity And remove the curse' - Yes, the last word. I've rated this poem 10/10. Well done!

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Thomas Carolan 10 April 2014

good on you you said it all in this well done

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