Sunday, August 9, 2009

Liar, Liar Comments

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You lied by telling me your mine,
You lied by telling me everything would be fine;
You lied by giving me hope when all was hopeless
You lied by giving me faith when I was faithless;
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Vandavasu Vittal 09 August 2009

Your childish anger against liers is visible here try writing iambic verses are you a novice poet but you are really good for a starter.

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liars are the sickness of love...no more hurting than being fooled by some one claim tove you..well done

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