Thursday, March 8, 2012

Liar Comments

Rating: 4.9

Look at the distance stands the liar
He killed the truth by setting a fire
He has every thing but the honour.
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Abdul Wahab
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Julie Schleppegrell 16 March 2012

Nice poem, The title was an good form of self submission. :)

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Ken E Hall 15 March 2012

A liar sewn up to the tee, sometimes a liar must be pitted. with all that weight around his neck tanks for sharing...regards

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Nuku Desmond 15 March 2012

Very well written poem.

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Crimson Soul 14 March 2012

Liars....There Are Too Many Truths Behind Their Lies, And So Little Of A lie Left In Their Wake. This Poem Gives That Glimpse. Very Nice.

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Malaya Roses 13 March 2012

Beautifully crafted words over the heinousness in the man with power. The damage is not all about abuse or power-monger but to the citizen who loves peace and want to live in secure environmental. Proven true... this type of bad-apple could not have peace or give peace... They are simple inevitable cancerous existence to human peace, liberty and humanity. Well done...! ! !

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Jinal Oswal 12 March 2012

Indeed a liar cannot live a happy life... all the points presented here are true... The person indeed becomes a coward when he lies... But I do beleive there are some situations where in a lie is the only thing that can work.... I loved your poem... very beautifully penned...

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Mark Tachi 10 March 2012

This is cool...and it reveals some rare sense of humor!

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Aman Sa 09 March 2012

It is good poem on its own but your other poems impressed me more. i would like to cite reasons first of all the rhyming effect of which I am severely critic unless the poet convinces me that it was not for the sake of rhyming only. For when you are trying to reach a point of mystique sort, its in my opinion is better to give the primary importance in the thought it self.

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Unwritten Soul 09 March 2012

I agree in many of opinions here, it's a deep, clear and thoughtful write...It's been a log time i havent read from Aamit, glad found one here...but i hope the sensitivity should be more highlighted here, because we are in different faiths, yes we could be in this group or not..i mean the truth is really out there but the lie and confusion will make us live in mist...of course they will claimed what they believe as the best, i have no comment for that but let we back to the real discussion, the liar...sometimes we can give forgiveness for them to back and repented but if few times they wont change then we need to be careful...it's not difficult to see who lies who not, the closer you are to them the more real life of them you will know...It's all by souls image...remember my friend Wahab, liars come when selfish emerged_Unwritten Soul

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 March 2012

You have talked bout athe truth of the liars! Well written!

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 09 March 2012

great poem. it has a lot of things to think about. i love it

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 March 2012

A liar could be some kinda perverts.But in this world wins only liars.You can win women with lies for short time enjoyments which perhaps for truth would be an impeachment.Mostly all statesmen and politicians are liars.Then liars came from religions mainly Abrahamic group.Abrahamic has 3 categories-Judaism, Christianity and Islam.The first is Gods chosen one, the second a lie propaganda and apocryphal imaginations with a Jewish man and the third which claimed apart from its headlines the whole world is infidelity.Therefore people came and attacked India in the name of Islam and never coined the truth that the newer versions are older version of a religion-Hinduism where a set of people propounded division theory or caste system of depravation-Brahmins...from Brahmins came Brahma and Abraham.Its Lord Krishnas rebirth as Kistna or another incarnation Lord Brahma after the preaching area Dwarka in Gujarat present day came under the influence of earthquake and tsunami.It is however said that Lord Krishna escaped to a place which is present day Jerusalem which is the pivotal center of equidistant claims of all three-abrahamic clashes, histories and almanacs.But liars used all shortcomings of religions through ages.Most marketing propagandas lie.For example lime bar soap which is not really lemon but an ester smelling like lemon.And then aerated drinks for profit and sales.We live in a world of lies and practice lies to reach truth which perhaps is a simple statement hard to digest and its time consuming as allegory of mythologies, manuscripts, conquests, challenges, human displacements, ravages, serendipity and prejudices and so on........Very thought provoking poem..well done

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Pheko Motaung 08 March 2012

A great poem with intriguing insights.Another classic and a masterpiece as far as I'm concerned! Congratulations and good luck on your supreme achievement.

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Ramesh Rai 08 March 2012

a nice poem leaves a question behind. great job.

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Lionel Dubos 08 March 2012

Beautiful form of the poem! You play with simple comparisons and all that defined the character well. I should not have to think of it as well. Congratulations and good luck!

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Salema Khatun 08 March 2012

this is a marvellous poem, the theme is simple but out of it you crafted a masterly craft, the character of a liar....and its implication on society....kudos to you.

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