Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Liar Comments

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I still can't believe you lied to me
Now I'm left alone to bleed
I'll go back to the start
And try again for you
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Destiny Avaritia
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Barbara Terry 28 May 2008

Destiny dear, there are more fish in the sea, and a lot more that are deserving of your affections. Don't worry about the one who got away, but keep looking for the one that will give you respect and treat you like a lady. I could feel the loneliness in this piece as you were writing it, and the consolation for that is, there is someone, somewhere, waiting for you. I know you won't find him in a few minutes, or even tomorrow, or maybe you will. Life is very full of surprises. This poem is written from a sad heart that is heavy with sorrow. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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