Tuesday, March 17, 2009
Liar Comments
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Hollow eye’s of pure deceit.
I can’t believe you lied to me.
One day you’ll see that you were wrong.
But by that time I will be gone.
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Stephen Stirk
17 March 2009
I liked this. The message is powerful and the rhyming is subtle and clever.They are almost half rhymes, but they work very well. A very nice read. Thanks for sharing.
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7/26/2025 8:54:03 PM # 1.0.0
You have a knack Concetta of blending the truth and producing great rhyming. I say, don't stop, Enjoy your work 10++