Sunday, July 20, 2008

Liar! ! ! Comments

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You said I
was your everything
You said I...
was the one
...
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millie st.claire
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Surya . 15 May 2009

expression of emotion rightly brought out.nice.posted 10 surya

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~ Jon London ~ 30 July 2008

Millie, very strong piece of writing....true emotion...lies are the words of the devils mail..........great piece Millie, keep expressing warmest regards Jon

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Serenity Prayer 29 July 2008

great poem. excellent job.

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Sabrina Helphrey 20 July 2008

u have good structure throughout the poem and i love your word choice great poem keep up the good work- Sabrina

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Rema Prasanna 20 July 2008

Effectively penned, a real feeling it generates.. liar is a liar..convincing.. good write.. Rema

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May Namoc 20 July 2008

awesome poem millie. i like ur use of words! ahaha, faves!

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Javier Falcon 20 July 2008

That is gorgeous, the repetition really impacts the writing, love it, good write...

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I love you where ever you are.......nice..... <3Payy

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