You said I
was your everything
You said I...
was the one
...
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Millie, very strong piece of writing....true emotion...lies are the words of the devils mail..........great piece Millie, keep expressing warmest regards Jon
u have good structure throughout the poem and i love your word choice great poem keep up the good work- Sabrina
Effectively penned, a real feeling it generates.. liar is a liar..convincing.. good write.. Rema
That is gorgeous, the repetition really impacts the writing, love it, good write...
I love you where ever you are.......nice..... <3Payy
expression of emotion rightly brought out.nice.posted 10 surya