Saturday, June 20, 2009

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Rating: 2.9

You can call me any name
You can judge me as you wish
Until you finally feel that rush of power
You can cut and slash my heart
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Jessica Robert
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Cat Tiger 02 August 2009

La troisième ligne devrait être déplacée à la dixième ligne. Autrement une poésie fine pour une jeune fille, bien que j'aie peur vous avez un complexe de martyre.

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Emily Oldham 03 July 2009

Amazing and inspiring write, keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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isabelle Cote 23 June 2009

I agree absolutely with Tracey :) exellent my best friend :)

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Tracey Wynn 20 June 2009

You will always be you no matter what happens. Nicely written and not falling down to that level was expressed well.

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