Saturday, October 10, 2009

Letting You Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay on my bed
In a tight little ball
Tears streaming down my face
I scream out your name
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Allison Unknown
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Bobby Butterfield 12 October 2009

try to rhyme your words it keeps the reader into the poem i like it alot

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