Saturday, January 17, 2015

Letting Him Go Comments

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I couldn't let him go
Walk away for ever
Forgets me, hates me
Just not being together
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Asma Zenjali
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2016

Words and feelings Made me hold him Though it was wrong.. I couldn't let him go DEcision we make, love and its complications. desire, wishes, passion, feeling.. all these you hve portrayed well in this poem. thank you very much dear poetess. tony

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 December 2015

Our fate is written but our willing is to play with a decision. Thank you.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 06 February 2015

A beautifully written poem portraying true feelings of heart Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 January 2015

your feelings are well expressed, Asma. Good. A separation is hard to accept, but when one gets to this sort of situation, she/he has to accept a separation. A relationship is strong when both she & he want to stay together. When it is only one-part's longing, a relationship is lame. It can't go on for long and/or is cause of pain..

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Asma Zenjali 29 January 2015

Thank you dear forsini .. nice to hear that ^^

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