Thursday, August 22, 2024

Letting Go To Move Forward Comments

Rating: 4.3

They hold the past so tight,
Afraid to move, afraid of the light.
Memories linger, shadows of old,
But they can't move forward if they stay controlled.
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vicki christison 30 August 2024

Great poem... If only I could learn to do what this is saying to do

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The beautiful rhyme scheme makes the poem all the more great. Makes the positive message of the poem ring in the readers' heart. Thank you, dear poet.5*

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Lovely aesthetic poem.Past is the lessons of life. But we need to move on. Future is where life. But we live in ‘the present. "Aage bhi Jane Na tu, peechhe bhi Jane Na tuu, Jo bhi hain bas Yahweh iss pal hain"..

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Chinedu Dike 22 August 2024

An insightful, motivational piece nicely embellished with poetic rhymes. Thanks for sharing this poem wit us.

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