Monday, November 12, 2018

Letting Go Comments

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Are you still recalling that dispute
You had long ago with a loved one?
It's time unkind words were rendered mute,
Let go of the reins, and let them run
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Lora Colon
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Bipasha D 23 November 2018

Another beautiful poem. I liked the theme, very appropriate for the season. Happy thanksgiving.

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Bri Edwards 18 November 2018

i'm putting it into showcase today, but i will not submit the whole showcase right away, just the intro part for now. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 15 November 2018

! i almost made it through the poem, knowing the definitions of ALL the words (pretty well at least) , but.......THEN ya just had to throw guile my way! ! ugh. well, sister, i AIN'T lookin' it up! ! ! a bit of a change for you here, this poem. i mean your topic. i REALLY LIKE IT and shall 'have to' put its in December's showcase, ...if i don't forget! to MyPoemList. breast...i mean BEST wishes, bri (: Happy Thanksgiving

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