I wish I'd known we'd wind up letting go,
I would've saved myself one more heartbreak;
Why would you think I'd like the same mistake?
I told you I despise the dance with woe:
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Deep feelings of sadness expressed in clarity of thought and mind. Soulful with strong emotions. A work of art. Thanks for sharing Danny.
I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again, Yet oft I wake with sorrow still with me: I'm sick and tired of my unanswered prayer! ....yeah letting you go but hold you with my breath of remembrance great 10+++
superb nexus of love- I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again, nice 10++++
Thank you guys for all your comments and your ratings. I'm glad you liked it, and it's an honor to be featured. I hope you could relate to it.
Yes, you do care. This poem would not have otherwise be written. I have experientially learned to remove romance from my definition and use of 'Love' You have written through what poets call inspiration.
MEMORIES! ! With sorrow still in me. Heartbreak! Not easy at all! ! ! Thanks for sharing.
MyNOTES added: Dear Danny, CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day! As I have said in my previous Response: An Excellent Sonnet!
Lovely Sonnet, Beautiful thoughts and words. An excellent Sonnet as old, BUT one thing I want to make you clear: I can tell you that God listens to everyone´s prayer and He responds all prayers, whether you are rich or poor, BUT as you perhaps not know: in His time, not in your time when you expect that. Sure, He will answer your prayer, never await the result, but that will come soon. a 10 for the vote. Excellent Sonnet as olds.
Beautiful sonnet! thank you for sharing.a ten..
Hello Danny, a well deserved Poem of the Day. I especially like the line, A captain lost, ‘n an old familiar sea! —, which seems to capture the mood of the poem.
I wish our yesterdays would leave me so… I wished, I wish, I'll wish, and wish again, Yet oft I wake with sorrow still with me: ......letting go is a virtue. only the strong ones can do it...psyhologically. thanku for this message. it helps me. tony
Dear Danny, such a great sonnet poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... huge 10++++
A sad and touching poem. I'm sick and tired of my unanswered prayer! Congrats!
A beautiful poem shared. Thanks poet for the poem and congratulations for being picked as the member poem of the day.
Loss, loss and loss! in human life only loss. Let's check all to advance to be saved, ...............
A well-rounded write that that lets care fly through the air.+++10
What a roller coaster life is but so many things happen for change and reason. A lovely picture and a perfect line... A Captain Lost, n an old familiar sea! Best wishes and you have some great quotes.
My husband have RP and I wonder if Esight can help him.