It’s okay love, you can go now,
but set the door ajar as you leave –
just enough for the light of your memory
to shine through.
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Thank you for commenting Khairul, pleased you liked. This was written following the death of my husband.
I have been deeply touched by this solemn, somber poem and loved the dignity with which the poetess is letting her beloved 'go'- where, I do not know, but can guess, going to never return. An excellent poem. That it has flown out direct from the heart, readers can easily understand.
Wow...it so sweet and break my tears from my soul too...beautiful poem...you are stronger woman day by day and also you have a great soul inside...blessed with writing talent too...
Thank you for reading and commenting Kelly, pleased you liked.
Something so hard to do, yet we must when we lose a love. Great message, and though different than your usual style, still amazing and beautiful.
Valerie-This was so deeply moving for me for I have experienced the loss of a mate.Written with grace, acceptance and endearing attitude.Time may heal.I guess be thankful of what you had
Beautiful words allowing yourself and helping others to let go. Thank You
very nicely written and fathoms the true and deep love for someone.
yes, even when seperated from love, memories do provide solace to the fatigued mind which does not nurse any regret. Beautifully expressed, Val.
very beautiful yes sometimes we have to let our love ones go through the door befor us but hopefully we will met again. Liked this well written poem from the heart Thanks
And our memories still hold true as the years fly by. I hope you write more poetry soon.