Friday, January 3, 2014

Letting Go Comments

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Off the tip of your tongue and from your mouth
your rancid accusations degrade me.
I try and push them away and block them out
from all that I'm contemplating.
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Melissa Robinson
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Kirti Sharma 28 June 2014

strong emotions... liked it..!

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Mountain Pass 27 January 2014

Paying forward: Man learns by hardship slowly And pays with sweat for light He never would have seen the stars Had he not seen the night

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Melissa Robinson 19 January 2014

Thank you very much.!

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Melissa Robinson 06 January 2014

Thank you very much sir..!

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Stan Petrovich 06 January 2014

This contention among us lacerates me; my hearts made of glass and it's shattering. I strive farthest from you but still long for your touch- the scent of your skin still remains comforting. I was especially impressed with this stanza. A flare for good writing!

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