Oh how many more of those stars above 
Shall I witness expiring like our love: 
Coffee cups, your left slipper, notes and comb, 
These restless visions of your summer tomb.
                
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Your amazing ur rite is beautiful 10++
Technically you poem is qualified to the standard of poetry...the rhyming is of served. I like it... All the best and keep the legacy of poetry.
wow.. this is a splendid write indeed.. shakespeare rejuvenated? i wonder/... nice composition indeed... felt your lines.. keep writing..10++ with love shan

 
                     
                
Wonderful, keep on writing, you will make a promising poet.