Sunday, July 5, 2009

Letting Go Comments

Rating: 4.8

Oh how many more of those stars above
Shall I witness expiring like our love:
Coffee cups, your left slipper, notes and comb,
These restless visions of your summer tomb.
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Obinna Eruchie 12 August 2009

Wonderful, keep on writing, you will make a promising poet.

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ur amazing at writing poems keep it up

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Heather Hill 08 July 2009

this is a good one..keep writing...

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Your amazing ur rite is beautiful 10++

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Lazarus Knix 06 July 2009

The start was simply amazing.

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Tyease Collins 06 July 2009

Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful -Elizabeth C.

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Obinna Eruchie 06 July 2009

You have penned a heartfelt rich sonnet. Keep it up.

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Carol Gall 06 July 2009

weath of memories - great write

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Jester's P 06 July 2009

Technically you poem is qualified to the standard of poetry...the rhyming is of served. I like it... All the best and keep the legacy of poetry.

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Catrina Heart 05 July 2009

Fabulous master shared...fine diction and rhymes...10+++

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Shashendra Amalshan 05 July 2009

wow.. this is a splendid write indeed.. shakespeare rejuvenated? i wonder/... nice composition indeed... felt your lines.. keep writing..10++ with love shan

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