Friday, May 22, 2009

Letting Go Comments

Rating: 4.5

we found out about 2 months ago
something that made me cry
the doctors said you were ill and we were in for a long battle
and through it all you always would say we are going to win this battle
...
Read full text

shiny shine
COMMENTS
Darlene Styles 12 February 2010

AWWWW! i teard up reading this: (

0 0 Reply
Jasmine Wayne 18 July 2009

Your emotions pierce through me...what can one say? I leave with a piece of your emotions and sorrow forever imprinted. Although it hurts it feels as if they let go of so much pain and suffering. Remember death is another form of life and although you may hurt from their departure, they are far from gone...

0 0 Reply
Brooke Luchich 16 June 2009

I am so sorry for your loss. This poem is amazing and truly heartbreaking

0 0 Reply
Jessica Robert 05 June 2009

Firstly, I am soooo sorry for your lost. Truly I am. Secondly, this was amazing. It really touched me, i felt sorrow and i almost cried. It's veryy heartfelt and i am so glad you shared this with me. It was wonderful doll. Keep writing: D <33 H&K's Jess<33

0 0 Reply
Nangula Immanuel 03 June 2009

Firstly, this is a very heart felt poem. Very sad, powerful, well written. Secondly, i am so sorry for your loss, i know it must be real hard and it might not seem that way right now, but you'll be ok, you'll make it through. keep writing Wishing you all the best in life Nangula

0 0 Reply
Yassar Ali 31 May 2009

10/10 illustrating real pain

0 0 Reply
James Mclain 30 May 2009

it is hard seeing the light through the window in your mind that you refuse in subline..the proper tempo you reached in a thought that you keep all the time deep inside where you kept him with you..if you are a good gurl you will never refuse him a place in your heart when you sleep thoughts of love all the time missing him there inside....iip

0 0 Reply
shiny shine

shiny shine

akron
Close
Error Success