Monday, November 7, 2011

Letters To The Universe Comments

Rating: 4.3

<The pages of my life I have ripped and tossed to the waters of the cosmos
I am but a sacrifice of my forefathers and those before them
Chapters I have scorched out of the earth and left it bleeding
The rawness of my anatomy has compelled my misdeeds
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Luvo Mjayezi
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 January 2012

wow! ndithe habu kwesi sihobhe ndancuma, ndeva intliziyo yam igxuma gxuma luvuyo.imnandi mhlekazi wam inkondlo yakho, ibonisa ukubhadla kwengqondo esentsha.well written poem.

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Luvo Mjayezi 24 November 2011

THank You both. Sometimes words just have their own will and its hard to stop them once they start pouring.

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Sajna Kailas 19 November 2011

Countless stars die and new ones arise The journey to the unknown continues This is the fate of that I am, utmost thinking! ! ! ! ! ! ! very good writing. like it a lot! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Margaret Beil 16 November 2011

You have really reached out to my nerve endings with this awe-inspiring poem! A great understanding of what we are leaving behind in our wake.10 Perhaps you would like my poem A Stars Lament.

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