Thursday, February 7, 2008

Letters Never Sent Comments

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The words are bottled up
From letters never sent
Sorry looms large, aches to be heard
Repeats itself over and over in my mind
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Broken Peaces 07 February 2008

Remarkable write Bill thouht provoking and something we all have share with in many different ways 10 Chris

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Matthew Coombe 07 February 2008

Thanks Bill. I enjoyed this. A great idea we can relate to. Things we should have done but didn't, regrets etc. Cheers!

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Erin Duphily 07 February 2008

I do the same thing, that this poem says. I try so hard to explain myself...to myself. Try to understand what I would say. Sp this poem really hit home. Thank you Sir Bill.

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Nomi Mas 07 February 2008

really good work. u took me there..

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Anita Atina 07 February 2008

A fiercely emotional poem, almost feel the tension rippling below the surface. Great writing Bill!

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