Monday, December 3, 2007

Letters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dear Mom and Dad,
I need just one more drag
On that glorious fag
I do not have the money
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Sandra Martyres
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Siddharth Singh 15 July 2009

Remarkable! you start as a breakaway and then midway you shift your stance to the other side of the fence. Unique, indeed! can be a good theatre act.

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Michael Harmon 30 June 2009

Sandra, you have the poet's and novelist's ability to see multiple perspectives. This is a strong piece. One suggestion, though. Perhaps, you could replace 'From the Son' with 'Dear Mom and Dad', and 'From the Parents' with 'Dear Son'. :)

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Onida 08 December 2007

Wonderful! if only kids listen to their parents can they get rid of their problems once more...tis nice regards, Nida

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Sandra Martyres

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