Thursday, January 29, 2009

Letter To My Other Half Comments

Rating: 5.0

we share the same body
but you won't answer my calls
in search for your forgiveness
I write you this letter
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Sabrina ,
COMMENTS
Sarwar Chowdhury 21 June 2009

fine indeed! well thought out. 10+

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Saadat Tahir 13 May 2009

hi Sabrina, its such an awesome expressive piece with a twist really liked it...great lines cheers

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 April 2009

Once again the pain is felt. Yes its really courageous of you to write it out. A letter to your other half is really expressive.

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Jerry Hughes 05 April 2009

This is so sad Sabrina, however, courageous of you to write it. Fondly, Jerry

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Akram Awadat 05 April 2009

wow very nice lines, well done i like it, thanks for sharing

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Ershad Mazumder 01 February 2009

Really it is a very good poem. Keep on posting and share with friends.

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