Friday, June 4, 2010

Letter To My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

How I long to be with you, but time and space divide us.
To run my fingers in your hair, on your soft skin.
To tell you my heart’s desire.
Embrace to our heart’s content
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Frank Boyd Jr
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Amrit Rathi 08 June 2010

What a beauty the poem contains! ... in your sleep you are bafflingly beautiful Even the faintest flicker of light cannot but reveal your delicate features.....Your hair shimmers with a glossy lustre in the full moon..........How I long to be with you, but time and space divide us........ You have great potential. I really loved your poem. Voted 10+.Thanks for inviting.

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 04 June 2010

well expressed, this is a real love letter... a 10 with no doubt...

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