Letter To My Inner Mother Comments

sometimes, I get distracted and borrow another Ego. Sometimes I am a bad friend, bad coworker, bad seat neighbor in the bus, I often cuss, And I wonder if it's just me Or of its all of us......... the concept of the inner mother is a really new form of poetry. very nice and original dear poet. thank u. tony. tjis poem is also psychological in its content. tony

The structure of this poem really stood out to me, especially how you began by acknowledging your flaws and then turned the overall mood around by acknowledging your strengths. Mothers are heroes. Great poem!

Ann Marge, pretty good poem if maybe a little too self-pitying. Immerse yourself in some good contemporary poetry (Mary Oliver, Rita Dove) if you want to improve? If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it, and, if you do, perhaps share it with interested friends? Thanks! Yrs, JC