Wednesday, August 17, 2005

Letter To Lily Comments

Rating: 5.0

Magnetically Adorable Gladiola,
Deliciously Drooling,
Amiably Lingering,
Electrifyingly Non-naughty,
...
Read full text

Herbert Nehrlich
COMMENTS
Mary Nagy 17 August 2005

Very lovely poem Herbert. Although, I have to say with some of your very lovely, romantic poems I almost feel as though I am 'peeping' into your private thoughts about your lady (like a nosy neighbor) . Thanks for letting us share such personal thoughts. Sincerely, Mary

0 0 Reply
Herbert Nehrlich1 17 August 2005

Raynette, I was trying to capture the ambience of a soul truly 'thinking' to be in love over distance, not knowing the other in real life but living in a kindred spirit relationship for reasons totally baffling and unknown and illogical. Sadly, the winds of fate blew it all away. H

0 0 Reply
Raynette Eitel 17 August 2005

Ok, I give up...there is a mystery here and I am obtuse. Or is it ok not to understand the relationship? You are very wordy, my friend. Raynette

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success