If I had met You
from the beginning,
maybe I would have never suffered
a long defeat
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Hi, Marieta! Aware of you now from your comment on my poem, I’m exploring your poetry. On this one I relate to the opening sentence. I tend to think now, though, that all of us need to experience a ruin, a desperation, to get serious with God. Yes, love is the best proof of God’s existence. Like the wind which is itself invisible, we can see love’s effects. -Glen
Powerful transformational perspective! Well done my friend.
Excellent innwr view and a great message to the blind present world,10+
Excellent innwr view and a great message to the blind present world,10+
May this love inside of you continue to trow a sparkle enlightening our hearts-
that is all very true and the entire poem was very well written, thank you for posting
‘I’m Thou’ –Veda…God has made us by His Image… Excellent presentation…like a chant…still continues to humm inside… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
From: Theresa Walker (United States ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/17/2009 2: 35: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hey God Bless You I dont quite understand Latrina Time so could you explain what that poem means. I really like the following poems they are very nice Letter To Jesus, and My Love For You.So feel free to send me a message anytime asking me to view your poems or just to say hello. BE BLESS LOVE YA
wonderful poem madam.. you have penned it so well.. every emotion brought out is so pure.. 10+++ regards prashant
The search for identity in this life time, short life time, is as beautiful or as evil as we make.... and this is beautifully expressed.
very beautiful and meaningful...for only in you...i love that phrase....and one thing about Jesus....unlike the simple man that leaves when things are not right or his way...Jesus will never leave you he is always with you no matter how hurt or how grey the time may be....only you can leave Jesus..He is with you to stay.. ~^..^
He is always their all through our life. Only we should open up truly to find his sign. Nice write.
very sweet. It has a good emotional touch. It also has humanistic value in a way and also an intellectual appeal IN A WAY.
Good poem Mari...faith divinity and submission interwoven smooth soft and sweet...thanks...10
The beauty of humility.and the simplicity of saving grace. Exceptional, my dear Marieta. Love, SandraX
A deeply spiritual piece. One of the best devotional writes I've had the pleasure of coming across. Simply beautiful.
From: Deborah Downes (Boynton Beach United States; Female; 57) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/4/2009 10: 55: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Letter to Jesus I loved this poem, in particular. I am always so touched when artists are not afraid to express their love for the Lord.
Marieta, Greetings thank you for your call.I have just read your Message to Jesus. We open up to our Guides and can sing in Praise every time.Your writing makes fine Spirit Sense to me and the happiness when reading the like is always a fine experience and one of the basic meanings of Life Itself.Thank you for sharing, I will read more, I am sure I will be up lifted. Kind Regards Philip
Jesus, "I want to survive For being with You." 5*****