Wednesday, November 9, 2005

Letter To God Comments

Rating: 5.0

dear god
how little i feel
about myself
despite your claim
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john tiong chunghoo
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***** ********* 09 November 2005

A beautifully flowing and well written poem John, but I have to disgree about it's view of free will. Yes there is tragedy all over our world, but not given by god, but by mans inequality, which in turn gives the consequences of lack of education, will and ultimately understanding of how to change our circumstances. Greed is at the root imo. A very thought provoking poem indeed. 10 from me. All the best Tai

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john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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