Letter To God Comments

a heart wrenching piece.this brought tears in my eyes, my dear. Lovely write.I love it. Love and hugs, Meggie

Ok........ dadi amma........ will improve it.

wow really a beautiful letter to God i liked it--superbly written -10 anjali

This is a fine poem Sania. You have penned the irony of the situation with a skill that belies your tender years (and I don't mean to be patronizing here) . I love the way you personalize both God and Santa, as if they were ordinary sort of people, not holier than thou grand ideas that float about in people's heads. And the final line shows that sort of passive resistance that enabled Nelson Mandella to survive in prison for so long. Congratulations. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

nice poem my friend, I am checkig out your poetry after reading one about your mom, bravo, although u r not who I thought.

Nice poem Sania........ yes! I know all needs tym, , , , , , , , , , , but I have to write 50 poems....for the completion of 500....... as I ve to delet sum f ma poems......... because dey r not poems............ jus an expression........ thanx for sharing.... regards with luv n care..... bye n TC....

Very good thought...All are quite often praying...but ur idea of sending God a letter is novel...keep going....

Congrats Sania. This is the way to write poetry; u picked up a very good subject and dealt it rightly.......well done.

waa sania....no words to describe this poem.....i was spellbound goin thr your lines.... 'If god you forget to tell Santa Don’t worry, I won’t cry I’ll jus wait another year And remind you over again '........these lines adds more credit to your work.......... ...............Sebastine 10+..........