James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Sunday, January 28, 2018

Letter's From The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can letter's like tear's rain down from the sky
As I look up, you turn away.
How will I know if I set you free,
Do you feel like me, that forever our love is gone?
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Bri Edwards 29 January 2018

(continued) some favorite lines: Do you feel like me, that forever our love is gone? I was made I thought you knew, To kiss your lips, no other lip's have I ever kissed. and: I've lived up to what you wanted from me, turn and Look what's left of me, as I fade away to MyPoemList...........bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 29 January 2018

letters aka letter's........? i wonder if you mean like 'love letters', 'friendly letters' etc. OR you mean like a, b, c, d, etc. i believe this shall end up in March showcase, once i get around to it; it will be a 'while'. For the most part, i follow the poem. as the Topic states, the poem IS very green. ha ha. as is often the case i THINK you are using apostrophes where i would not and once where i would. other times i agree with your usage. (to be continued) .....

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Debendra Majhi 29 January 2018

letters like my salty tears are falling from the sky....poet you have treated this poem in a very sensitive manner. Thank you

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 January 2018

James, such a well penned poem...10+++

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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