Letter From The Battlefield-02 Comments

When you have the time your thoughts reurn to where your heart is.Dodging death takes up most of your time I'm afraid. No room to think tender thoughts as a rule. These thoughts occur mainly after the battle when you are in comparitive safety. You express your thought well in poetic prose well done

Very poignant. Home is where the heart is...even in the midst of battle. Warm regards, Sandra

Are you a student of war? If you can spare a few moments try 'Confrontation'.

In part 2, daddy pours our his feelings about war to his daughter. This is a sad but a true narrative of wars in which man seems to only know to use to dominate and take from others.A 10 Thanks for inviting me to your poem site.

Another well written follow-up deep with words that move feeling.

Its my privilage to read your poem. Hopes are high and a soldier's heart is full of love for his baby daughter. You have confirmed what I think. War is both futile and demonic. There may be liberty at stake but at what price?

wow! I am a Viet Nam Veteran...I see the bitter/sweet of battle...the sweetness of a cry or smile and if you are feeling and seeing.., .let me take your hand...place it over my heart...and we shall... continue together... I felt your every word...my brother

Emotional poem, i like this part as well!

very painful lines...done very well war is a hated activity yet persued with impunity and planned far in advance despite the protestatations and wonder speak... gibberish meant for the common man...while....KRUPP von stahl is always at work....sitting atop his horse stables** very well penned lines...cheers **The third reich **Krupp

Touching piece. Great one.

Baby, If anything happens to me, Look after my little angel, Say her, I love her more than anything, In this battlefield, I am trying to survive, very touching verses aforesaid..10 rated.