Saturday, July 21, 2012

Letter From An Unborn Child Comments

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With every moment I keep on tossing and turning
Not because my heart keeps yearning for more,
But rather, because my heart is burning
From the fear of reality
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Sir T.A.E.P.S
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Valerie Dohren 22 August 2012

This is so lovely, a very inspired write and so novel. I guess each unborn would have something different to say, the possibilities are endless.

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Leslie Philibert 21 July 2012

Like the idea, and the prose/poetry structure of this poem, good work

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