Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Letter For Happyness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I just want to be happy.

All I ever wanted was to
Just hang with my friends,
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Adrian Cordova
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Martha Macias 10 July 2010

This is a truly amazing poem

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Marissa Butler 10 July 2010

This is a really beautiful poem. You have to have some real heart to write something so deep.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 07 July 2010

'And I'd be just fine living with minimum wage./And I'll slave just because they call love a labor./And I'd live in any place just to feel at home.' These are amazing lines and this is an awesome poem.

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Sarah Harris 03 July 2010

This poem is truly beautiful!

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Summer Holst 01 July 2010

Through your writing you're so transparent and i can see right into your heart. :) Your love is strong and that is what makes happiness and happines is what makes life. Amazing poem! :)

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Sherri Coulter 30 June 2010

Adrian, she is lucky to have you, every life is a grand story, and happiness is where it's at. 10/10

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