Lets Pass This Night Comments

And this is magnificent write. Game of hide and seek. Well played game. River flowing to sea... eagerly waiting to unite. Lovely poem sir.

Glorious piece....wonderful to read....thank u.

Excellent: Let the river carry your emotions To the sea where my heart is waiting To embrace your love Before he final ring of the morning bells

Night and day play hide and seek and they love each other. Night and day are not at all separated from each other. The morning ring bells with fairy appearance. An amazing poem is excellently penned.