Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Let's Paint The World Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let's pretend
Life isn't painful
And, love conquers all
Let's say;
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samson ogbeewi 22 July 2022

Hello Nicole, I tried sending you a message but, couldn't reach you. How do I reach you please? You can send me a Mail however, sammyogbessgmail.com; looking forward to hearing from you.

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Julia Luber 15 March 2019

Awesome, Nicole! D'Settami- I feel like I'm set up for a couple of reads to feel some transcendence. Real, gritty, rugged, and honest. I look forward to more. Checkin' out! Ciao!

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M Asim Nehal 25 October 2018

Outstanding Poem, I quote few lines from your beautiful and articulate poem: : Together we'll do this— As we walk side by side You are my breath When I feel as if I have died In fact, you can be the coffin And, I'll be the satin sheets And, if you're the fire I swear to be the heat!

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Saadat Tahir 14 December 2011

It's how you get up And, not how you fall Let's drowned in cliches And, choke on the words nice....liked it but i guess nowadays length of a poem does matter.... be happy :)

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Nicole Settimi 15 October 2019

Thx for the feedback!

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