Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Lets Move On Comments

Rating: 5.0

How long does it take you to turn other way,
how long you take to open wings & flyaway,

no matter how comfortably with me you groove,
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Dhanesh (trying to be) poet
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Mandar Madhav 09 April 2009

nice one i like ur thinking

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Proma Mukherjee 30 March 2009

its a gr8 one...i really could relate to it...

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J. P. Dullahan 28 March 2009

Good poem - very philosophical attitude to a mutual attraction despite irreconcilable differences. I liked it very much - 10.

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Neha Aradhye 25 March 2009

nice one....u crafted sum story..

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Reshma Ramesh 25 March 2009

awe..........bitter sweet poem...well penned

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Fiona Davidson 25 March 2009

Great write Dhanesh...10++

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Vinod Kumar 25 March 2009

Very nice subject it comes from the good and bad experience we had, hope the all happenings for better, Gita says that long long back, experiences are the growing tree`s branches. thanks for sharing 10+

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