Let's Make Love Tonight Comments

A amazing poem. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you Marieta for sharing the amazing poetry.

Your poem's title is as nude as rainwater, and the lines that follow offer evidence that your conceptual expectations are bursting with transformative fertility.

I like this poem, it has a dark undertone that I can appreciate. To become one single corpse is a great line and image.

love making so free so full of all that one is...passion...blowing forward...sideways...up..down..stop! ...is not a command...hands move about...knowning not where...what a dare...how care-free is that...you have woke in me...my dreams...dreamt.

Hi Mari - This is beautiful - so gentle and yet so emotive - this is how cerebral (dream) love really works. 'One eternal emotion of dream' a beautiful 'coming together' of lovers - separated by distance but locked together in passion.. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such an elegant way. It scores a MAX with me! Love you in poetry - JOHN X

So much passion in so few words... Wow....

‘…were we will subsist for being eternal..’ Splendid ‘touch-down’ in the fathomless chasm of entirety and eternity… Ten Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to my page with your graceful comments and criticism too welcomed… [Why hack my she &c] niv

what happens while the act! nicely penned! 10

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

I procrastinate such harsh realities

Corpse indeed is the word that fully captures the sempiternal divinity of lovemaking encapsulate rather than the manifest temporal indulgence… 10

lovely poem cant belive how well u chose the words to agree with the passion of love 10

The inner philosophy of 'coitus' so well penned, so true.

From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

From: Alan Draper (Braunton, Devon United Kingdom; Male; 54) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/18/2009 9: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Thanks Mari I've read your poems. You have good imagination but the poems are too serious for me. Maybe thats the way in Romania. It does have a sad reputation to us Westerners. I love laughing and challenge you to write a funny poem to make me happy. Lots of luck from your Froggie friend Alan

a feeling of romance and love................10

I have yet to experience this. Very good poem.................

...Excellent thought process....................

Congrats. The romance of love making beautifully captured. 10+++++++++++++

we will be like two butterflies released from their cocoons. We will awake in our novel world of seconds, were we will subsist for being eternal........sincere desire on parts of both. i liked the purity of mind and that is essential for any relation to endure.....10 read mine..........love at furst sight...........miss i miss you...anywhere...butterflies around...