I am in a bus, going away
Away from you
Away from sleepless nights
I hope I can forget you for a while,
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this is the first i've read of you, Ivy, & you have a style all your own. nobody can touch it. this was so wise to link a bus ride to the trails of fate, illusions! excellent. keep writing, babe. Sus.
It was so lively As if I was Sitting beside you In the bus And you were silent So silent I could Read you. Love for the beautiful poem. ~Sukumar
I hope that all is well with you Ivy and that a much brighter path lays ahead Love duncan x