Let's grow up together
Let's eat berries
And dream of fairies
Also, let's dance with them in the summer
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Beautiful poem. A poem of love, " our love's coffer", " Till our love writes it's season /Let's steal all the time"…. Wonderful expressions….5 stars, dear poet…thank you for sharing
Oops, that's line 12. I think I said line 8. Or did I? On the old system, I could have gone to 'manage comments', deleted the comment if it was wrong, and posted a new one! Why can't we do that anymore?
I understand, the complexities sir. I really appreciate your point of view but in 'tinter' I had in mind to say we'd be it's 'color' meaning adding some brightness. Thank you sir
Thank you for inviting me to read this poem. It has some nice rhymes, but parts are hard to understand. For example, in line 8, a tinter is a person who specializes in tints or dyes. I don't really see the connection. Maybe I didn't get enough sleep last night. Sorry.
A beautiful poem of love with perfect rhyme! Let me quote---Let knowledge become a vagabond And let him wander Like a lost dreamer Till we've struck our bond And until our love has awoken to the sun Let's grow up together
And until our love has awoken to the sun Let's grow up together. Beautifully written. Growing together cherishing the little joys of life should be the priority.
A magnificent poem! Stanzas are zig zag but they don't lose the focus of the theme. I liked the first three lines most...top score!
This is what is required. I liked the flow, message of your poem.5*****
Thank you Dr. Asim_ Please do consider reading my other poem 'Brother in Arms'
A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and stay blessed.......
Thank you Mr. Dike, am grateful _please consider reading my poem 'Brother in Arms'
An interesting poem that depicts the many wonders of love. Very heartwarming.