Wednesday, December 29, 2021

Let's Grow Up Together Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let's grow up together
Let's eat berries
And dream of fairies
Also, let's dance with them in the summer
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Craig Moses Uche
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An interesting poem that depicts the many wonders of love. Very heartwarming.

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Abdulbarry Asuku 10 May 2022

This is awesome 🙌

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Beautiful poem. A poem of love, " our love's coffer", " Till our love writes it's season /Let's steal all the time"…. Wonderful expressions….5 stars, dear poet…thank you for sharing

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Kim Barney 25 January 2022

Oops, that's line 12. I think I said line 8. Or did I? On the old system, I could have gone to 'manage comments', deleted the comment if it was wrong, and posted a new one! Why can't we do that anymore?

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Craig Moses Uche 05 June 2023

I understand, the complexities sir. I really appreciate your point of view but in 'tinter' I had in mind to say we'd be it's 'color' meaning adding some brightness. Thank you sir

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Kim Barney 25 January 2022

Thank you for inviting me to read this poem. It has some nice rhymes, but parts are hard to understand. For example, in line 8, a tinter is a person who specializes in tints or dyes. I don't really see the connection. Maybe I didn't get enough sleep last night. Sorry.

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Bharati Nayak 02 January 2022

A beautiful poem of love with perfect rhyme! Let me quote---Let knowledge become a vagabond And let him wander Like a lost dreamer Till we've struck our bond And until our love has awoken to the sun Let's grow up together

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 January 2022

And until our love has awoken to the sun Let's grow up together. Beautifully written. Growing together cherishing the little joys of life should be the priority.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2021

A magnificent poem! Stanzas are zig zag but they don't lose the focus of the theme. I liked the first three lines most...top score!

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 December 2021

This is what is required. I liked the flow, message of your poem.5*****

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Craig Moses 31 December 2021

Thanks so much Dr. Asim, so grateful.

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

Thank you Dr. Asim_ Please do consider reading my other poem 'Brother in Arms'

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Chinedu Dike 29 December 2021

A beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and stay blessed.......

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Craig Moses 31 December 2021

Thanks so much Mr. Dike, I'm grateful _your style is inspiring too

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Craig Moses Uche 31 December 2021

Thank you Mr. Dike, am grateful _please consider reading my poem 'Brother in Arms'

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