Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Lets Go With A Smile Comments

Rating: ★5.0

When the days are blunt and bleak
Rivers dull and deep
I felt his boat drop. Anchor
The ripples on Styx I think
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Rosalita Fernandez 26 March 2009

i love it, beautifully done, can feel the sadness and the strength at the end.

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Colin Jeffery 07 December 2008

A very good poem on many levels.

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Keith Young 03 December 2008

I like your poem very metaphoric i understand it to its fullist

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 03 December 2008

good usage of words... :) a nice piece

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Reshma Ramesh 03 December 2008

death is like a luxury......it doesn't come to all.......u have to earn it...

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Indira Babbellapati 03 December 2008

my god...for one who dabbles in hard figures!

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