Friday, June 17, 2011

Lets Go To A Funeral Comments

Rating: ★5.0

She's on the floor, again.
This time I'm not sure what to do,
what would she want me to do?
There's an empty bottle of pills,
...
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Dakota Ellerton
funeral Mothers
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

Nicely written with plenty of pathos. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A fine 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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