Lets Dance Comments

A very powerful voices crying out For humanity...

A touching poem, story of a woman nicely painted...............................................

The image of a helpless woman who got lured by disguised deceit and lies and allowed herself to be used at will by a rogue of a man until finally thrown to the drains. Fortunately she is not all lost! She has found a new passion in the sea and it creates waves of joy in her! As ever, a moving write!

Wonderful and very moving poem, so much of our emotions entwined into your words.

When i read it what i feel was like reading a burning letter as much as the burning emotion soaring inside it..that you want to let go and it flying above then gone...and what falling later was blessing rain because you are over it...i feel so good :)

Beautiful poem Hazel. She is used by the time which leaves her broken hearted. Still she feels her heart and dance, she is filled with the rhythm and beat. She gets up and walk again. Loved reading it.

Hazel, this is a beautiful poem. impressive. i like the way you painted the whole scene