Saturday, March 10, 2012

Lets Dance To The Tune Of Lust Comments

Rating: 4.2

Lets Dance To The Tune Of Lust

The world says hush
It's not the time to rush
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Freespirit Juneja
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Robert Green 05 June 2012

Lust can be a great driving force if tempered with love

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Louis Cecile 19 April 2012

A nice smoothly flowing poem in tune with the title that is strong in its sentiment. Very playful almost mimicking child like manners. Good work

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Neela Nath Das 17 April 2012

Really, We know it but like to deny. Very true.Flow? Awesome!

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Jose Guevara 08 April 2012

There it is, a real human, not just the idea of being one

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isabella Francis 08 April 2012

Awesome. Lust is often seen as disgusting and is considered a sin. honestly, ppl should try being lusty for a day. Adding it as one of my favorite poems. :)

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Ben Burger 08 April 2012

I couldn't say it better than Rishi Kaashyap. But I will add my thanks for allowing me to read brillance over and over again. You are a poet worthy of recognition. Not just from other members, but the world over, keep it up

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David Gerardino 07 April 2012

fashioned dust, nice line, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Rishi Kaashyap 07 April 2012

Amazing lines... very well Put down... The Rhymes cover up for even the peculiar syntax.. This is what everyone must learn - to enjoy every minute of their living... Come on Sir! Forget those things which are must - write to the thought of YOUR lust

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Anubhuti Modi 07 April 2012

nice flow...........nice poetry

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Anubhuti Modi 07 April 2012

nice rhythm, .nice flow

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Indira Babbellapati 07 April 2012

there's lot of rhythm in ur poetry...

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Martin O'Neill 05 April 2012

At first I struggled with the phrase 'the things which are must', but, as I read on and began to enjoy the poem and it's message for it's own sake, the strange sentence construction took on a wonderful meaning of it's own. I now would not change it for the world. I will be honest, I rarely read very many poems of those who ask me to, unsolicited, as they tend to be of dubious grammatical value. Also, I never comment unless I feel the poem is worthy of praise - I do not like to criticise for fear of causing offence or dampening the enthusiasm of a budding poet. I really enjoyed this one. Well written

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