Monday, October 20, 2008

((Lethargy)) Comments

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Life is oozing with innate vigor
as sunbeams caress the earth.
Flora sprouts a welcome bliss,
as fauna makes merry a novel day.
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Alison Cassidy 31 October 2008

A interesting poem about not taking life for granted methinks. Your first stanza is a bright and bold description of life at its best and the rest of the poem shows how it can so easily disappear into a sea of neglect. You're right, lethargy is often the culprit. A thoughtful, well considered write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Marvin Brato Sr

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