Sunday, September 13, 2015

'Lethargy And Pestilence' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Echoes of the foreign trigger
Cascade through the children's ears
And the scholars' tongues
Content in their indoctrination
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Michael Patrick Hunt
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Michael Hunt 13 September 2015

Thank you so much! I try to choose words that I think might convey a different meaning to each reader. I really appreciate your kindness.

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Pamela Sinicrope 13 September 2015

Wow! I like your poetry. The imagery is so strong and simple. You choose your words and metaphors well.

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