Lethal Routine Comments

We need the hope we need to cope We need the help from God before the patience rope be cut....we need his blessing for all the purpose to make our life beautiful n energetic....10

lovely lines but don't be negative... life without Hope is nothing! ! ! ! keep your Hope alive!

love this poem. you have talent :)

I love it! ! ! i think noone could ever express this much feeling in a poem more than u did in this poem! ! thanks for sharing

everyone want to cry everyone want to die..................hmm, Merna You have realized some truth of life............but it is not an eternal truth..............life also has bliss in it's kitty, though difficult to find but not impossible..............a good work......keep it up.............

A very insightful poem, Merna. I suspect that we all need to be infused with new 'spice' in our life from time to time. Of course, if we never tasted 'bland', how could we truly appreciate 'spice? ' Excellent poem! Richard

amazing with amazing on top

WOW! ! ! ...GREAT POEM...I loved it a looooooooooot....this kind of poems is my favourite kind...keeeeeeeeep writing my dear :) :) :)

In darkness we reach out through the echoes of depresive thoughts, we touch the light but only by turning to feel its heavenly glow. Thanks for the share my friend

It is so nice that in our depressions we look at God....... and more nice when we look at God with confidence! Honest work dear friend and keep it up! !

yes, i hate the routine.........and i tried to express it in a poem but i couldnt.and you succeeded!

Look! ! I kept searchig for words to say but I didn't find any word to express my really deep feeling about your poem I can't say aby thing except....................NO COMMENT.

I hope the lethal routine will end with the bliss of loyal resurrection of love and plastered with peace.I dunno if Gulf people understands Hindi a bit i will chant two lines for a nightingale 'Suhaani (pleasnat) rangat (colours) ab(now) yeh(this) chha gayi hai(having an ambience) Yeh(this) duniya(world) khoobusrat(beautiful) ho gayi hai(it has become) ' A 10 from me.

'We need the hope we need to cope We need the help from God before the patience rope be cut' Good one Merna, but you know, losing hope is a sin? No matter how hard the things be, never let the rope cut. And to get out of this 'copy/paste' feeling, you should go and spend some time away from buildings and cement, in nature. Listen to the ruffling leaves, singing birds. See green and colorful. Thanks for sharing